Thursday, December 4, 2008

Joe Daugherty Beta

Joe's Life -Beta for DVD design

7 Comments:

At 11:36 AM, Blogger Corey said...

Main photo still has red- (Photoshop will clean that up).
The main menu background text is bit pixelated.green text should be bigger.

 
At 11:37 AM, Blogger adam said...

i like the menu design. make sure to change the aspect ratio on your menus so they all match up in size. i might add some audio to the menus.

 
At 11:37 AM, Blogger J-Work said...

like the comedy feel with the graffiti. the text looks a little hard to read. nice wink

 
At 11:37 AM, Blogger EggoWafflesLvr65 said...

The text is very difficult to read. Maybe you could add a stroke to the text to make it stand out a bit more.

 
At 11:37 AM, Blogger K Gib said...

It's kind of hard to read the red font over the red brick, if you keep the red maybe add a stroke or drop shadow, or even just change the font color. I like your transitions. Overall I like the colorful menu.

 
At 11:38 AM, Blogger Nick Sarantakis said...

Fix the contrast on the buttons. Change the green text on your menu. Make it black. You can try changing the brightness/contrast on the brick background so that the text stands out better.

 
At 11:50 AM, Blogger Tetta Oyama said...

transitions between each menu looked little choppy, nice work overall
some images should fit the size of the menu

 

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